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The 10 Best Screenwriter Film Commentaries (aka My Favorites)

When I first started buying DVD’s (and now Blu-rays) I thought the idea of a writer or director talking over a movie would be annoying and stupid. Until I actually took the time to listen and realized they’re awesome, even becoming the deciding factor on if I want to buy the home version, or no, if it doesn’t have a…

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Spider-Man: Homecoming – A Screenwriter’s Review

Let’s get real here: Amazing Spider-Man 2 was shit.  It was so shit that Sony decided to reboot the entire franchise rather than make the third planned film. And dammit am I ever glad they did. Spider-Man: Homecoming is my favorite Spidey flick since the first Tobey Maguire/Sam Raimi outing. Sure, the general consensus is that Spider-Man 2 is the best,…

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Proofread, Line Edit, Format Fixes

The service involves editing your dialogue and action description, to make sure your screenplay is clean and reads as fast as possible. Think of it like your screenplay needs to lose some weight, and once I’m done it’s a lean, mean, screenplay machine! I also fix grammatical and format errors. Before my service: After my service: I go through your screenplay line-by-line, and edit your dialogue and description…

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Screenplay Coverage

I offer three types of screenplay coverage: BASIC – Includes 5 pages of extensive feedback on your script and suggestions on how to improve its story, structure, characters, formatting and dialogue which get your screenplay in the best possible shape it can be. Think of me like a trainer, but for screenplays. Coverage is provided with a minimum of five pages of notes. I…

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